Hi, Mary Kate, I hate to use your comments for this stuff but as you can't access notes, it's the only way I can work with you on your submission.

I just spotted that you made one of the changes I mentioned (you removed the tags - yay!). Thank you for that. But you did not address the other one about changing the capitalising on your subtitle. It should be written like a sentence, as I explained in my message - no caps except first letter.

Also - I just spotted your kind shoutout and mention of HHH, although I'm puzzled about the quote you shared as being from one of my pieces and that resonated with you deeply, as you put it.

That was not my quote; it was the quote of the person I was writing about, and it was actually quite offensive in the context in which she said it.

I'm confused about why you pulled that out of my story, and attributed it to me as being a positive quote??

I would appreciate you removing it, please.

Also, please let me know when you've made these two changes so I don't have to keep checking. Thanks.