Hi, Rachel! I just saw your re-submission in HHH. Thank you! You're very close to having done the link correctly!! At least you've got the URL there, and you correctly tagged the writer!

So now - in order for that link to look like a pretty box with a picture, instead of an unattractive link, all you need to do is put the cursor right at the very end of the link, and click on "enter."

In this case, this means putting the cursor exactly to the right of the "e" at the end of the link (...with-you-be95f707bb2e). If you aren't sure what I mean, ask someone (family/friend) who can physically show you.

I could do it for you but I want you to learn this, as it will be required in other submissions, plus it's good to know to share your own links or other people's work in any future pieces that you write, whether you publish in a publication or not.

The one thing you have not yet done - and this is now the third time I'm asking ... please run this entire piece through Grammarly because it is loaded with errors that would take me ages to edit, which I do not do. I don't have time.

As I've also said before, when you do this you'll learn many of the common mistakes you're making, and over time it will help you improve your writing, which means you'll get more reads.

I will remove it from the pub again for now - and after you've put it through Grammarly and made the changes it suggests, please feel free to submit again.

Thanks, Rachel :)