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Jet, what a cool story! I love the interesting twist about twins born far enough apart to be different sun signs!

Great descriptions (as usual) for the feelings and imagery in this piece. I always feel like I'm right there in the scene when you write.

Thank you for another excellent submission to FLF, and thank you, too, for your kind shoutout for me and for the pub! (PS I love that photo!! Great choice!)

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Liberty Forrest
Liberty Forrest

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