Sep 11, 2024
WOW! Love this, Denée!! I'm blown away by where you went with that first line!! What a brilliant imagination. Love the Latin - nice touch!
And your descriptive and emotional writing - wonderful!
Thank you for this super exciting story!!! A fantastic contribution to FLF. Yay!! And thank you for your kind shout-out and sharing the links to the pub and the prompt!! 💜